Posts tagged "bad copy"

Camouflage is easily one of nature’s coolest tricks. So it’s pretty cool artwork in these ads, but I don’t think they’re very good.

Copy reads: “Animals can’t be recycled. Please don’t litter.”

I don’t really get the connection here with the camo. The message is really unclear. They should have saved the camo theme for a different campaign for the zoo with a tag along the lines of: Come see them. If you can.

(Or something like that)

If you want to see some real octopus magic, click here. But my favourite cephalopod is still the cuttlefish.

Yes, I’m a nerd.

Agency: Y&R, Johannesburg | Source: I Believe in Advertising

Here’s another awful ad for you on GCBC’s Terrible Tuesday.

First, this ad makes me think, “geez, I sure have to do a lot of fucking hand waving just to watch tv.”

Second, why the hell is the Old Spice guy there?

Third, apartment 69? Really?

Agency: BETC London | Source: Copyranter

Well this is insanely bad.

There are many reasons to hate this campaign, but I’ll give you this one:

They haven’t completed the task to show OTHER brands as the dirty, druggie vegetables. Really you’ve connected your branding with purposely unappealing artwork of vegetables. I’m not a psychologists, but I sure as hell know that people are usually only half paying attention to ads. To me, there is a MASSIVE danger here of connecting your brand to exactly what you’re trying to say it isn’t.

Agency: Jandl, Bratislava | Source: Ads of the World

This can’t be real, right?
I found it on Reddit over the weekend. I’m assuming that it’s a fake but if not, that was one ballsy pitch. Pedophiles meet Pedal-philes?
That was bad. Sorry.
Agency: Hopefully nobody | Source: Reddit

This can’t be real, right?

I found it on Reddit over the weekend. I’m assuming that it’s a fake but if not, that was one ballsy pitch. Pedophiles meet Pedal-philes?

That was bad. Sorry.

Agency: Hopefully nobody | Source: Reddit

Naming colours seems like it would be a pretty great job. This choice seems like a good way to lose that job.
Source: Reddit.

Naming colours seems like it would be a pretty great job. This choice seems like a good way to lose that job.

Source: Reddit.

Listen, I’m ALL for fighting douche parking. But blocking online articles and then FORCING facebook shares is equally douchy.

Not cool, Village. Not cool.

Agency: Look At Media, Russia | Source: I Believe in Advertising

The copy translates to:

“Men will never give you just pleasure.”

So I get the toilet one. We’ll give you pleasure but also pee on your seat. But could someone explain what blueish stuff we leave on your bed?

Agency: Loja Comunicação, Rio de Janeiro | Source: I Believe in Advertising

Gentlemen, here’s a friendly bit of advice:
When buying your wife a mother’s day card, read it first. All of it.
Source: Reddit

Gentlemen, here’s a friendly bit of advice:

When buying your wife a mother’s day card, read it first. All of it.

Source: Reddit

I’m pro pot, but I’m still not sure that this is the best e-mail to be sending on mother’s day.

Hell, why are you e-mail her anyways? Couldn’t you at least pick up the goddamn telephone?

Full disclosure: I will be playing mini-putt with my mom.

Agency: Not sure | Source: Denver Post

I guess we’ll make it a gay theme for Friday. Here’s Ray Ban spot from their Never Hide campaign. I posted another one of these ads a while ago. I don’t get it.
Sunglasses = hiding.
Agency: Marcel, Paris | Source: Trend & Topic

I guess we’ll make it a gay theme for Friday. Here’s Ray Ban spot from their Never Hide campaign. I posted another one of these ads a while ago. I don’t get it.

Sunglasses = hiding.

Agency: Marcel, Paris | Source: Trend & Topic

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Good Copy/Bad Copy is an advertising blog by tj arch, a self-loathing narcissist, currently making a modest living as a copywriter. The intent is to critique ad copy, but I frequently get off topic.

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